Tuesday, April 15, 2008

Re-Write The Ending Story of a Movie

Hi Serena

Now I'm going to re-write the ending story for one of my favorites movie, that is A Walk To Remember. Actually, I love the ending. But still, it feels so sad for me. So now, I'll change it.

First...

The Real Story

Landon Carter is a famous but rebellious guy at his fellow high school with his friends. But one time, he gets his punishment from the high school because he is founded for entering the forbidden area at a factory and with a guy whom injured that time. He has to participate after-school activities like tutoring and performing in drama. Then he meets Jamie Sullivan, a quiet girl and loves books very much. Landon asks her to help him for learning his line of the scripts. And Jamie agrees. But one day, when Jamie asks him if they will meet after school for practice the script together, Landon responds only "in your dreams". It really makes Jamie feels so embarrassed, moreover Landon says it in front of his friends. From that time they aren't close anymore and Landon has to learn and practice the script by himself. The play is started. During the play, Jamie surprised Landon and the audience with her beauty and voice when she sings the song. Landon kisses Jamie at the end of the play, which is not in the script. From that time, Landon tries to get closer to Jamie but Jamie rejects him on and on. Until Landon finds his friends mock Jamie by sharing picture of "modified" Jamie. Landon is so mad. He protects Jamie by hitting his best friend and since that time he stay away from his friends and get closer with Jamie. Landon tries to make her dreams come true. Start from "being two places at once" and tattoo. Finally, Jamie tells the truth to Landon if she has leukemia. Landon is shocked. Then he tries many things to make all the Jamie's dreams come true such as building telescope so Jamie can see a comet.
The story ends
with Jamie's death and before that Landon and Jamie's married in the church, where Jamie's parents get married, which is the top Jamie's dream.
I was so sad when Jamie's died.


So my happy ending story is:

After they get married, they spent their life together. Suddenly, Landon asks Jamie to check her condition. Jamie refuses it but Landon still encourages her then Jamie agrees. Surprisingly, doctor says there is miracle. No his knowledge could describe what happens with Jamie. No cancer anymore in her body. It is miracle!! God gives second chance to live. Jamie and Landon can't believe it so they try to check again in other doctor. And the doctor says the same thing. Jamie can be a normal and healthy person again. They are very happy and thank to God. Day by day, Jamie's condition is going better. Then finally, God gives them one more time happiness. They have twins. Realizing how God loves them so much, they give their children their loves and they enjoys their life gratefully together..

:)

So nice...

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